PORKBUNS this smells....like pizza
HAHA hilarious adrian
that was so funny, wtf. I didn't see it coming...uber turkey gets revenge on normal hunters that appear to also be matrix-style fighters. Funniest flash you have, and some parts has some great animation. I liked how you drew the turkey and the gun turret/tree. Cool animation. Good camera angle change when you showed the position of the gun behind the rock by the way. I love animating a sequence like that. Good work.
yo matt!...yea man animating that part is pretty fun...akthough i messed up on one part of this movie and i may resubmit a new one but now im thinking different and i think ill just leave this one...and yea man i thought this movie would be a pretty funny concept...anywayz thanks for the review...
Shows great potential
The drawing/animation in this flash was fantastic. The backgrounds you did on photoshop were awesome, and the animation looked like it came out of an anime. You made a flash that looked like it was segmented out of an anime, but it would be even better if you came up with an original idea. At least avoid using the name Ryu for the lead fighter in the dragon clan. (thats obviously right out of Ninja Gaiden). Apart from my unnecessary criticism, you did a fantastic job.
Well done, but not polished.
I see that you haven't gotten much constructive criticism in these reviews. I think you had excellent potential, as demonstrated in the opening drawing of a character. You need to keep to a topic, and develop a story to go along with your animation. I saw skill in this work, but I also saw laziness. Don't add random crap about tuna when you run out of ideas. Put effort into an animation, and stay strong to an idea. You'll be surprised how good it comes out.
You deserve a higher score.
I thought that your drawing skills and animation skills were great. The quickly developed story was awesome too. You deserve to be on the front page, but there are too many non-flash users voting on entries. They probably have no idea how long it takes to animate a long movie with detailed slides like that. Anyway, you'll make a bigger mark on Newgrounds in the future. Good luck.
Quite professional work
I'm sure you aren't surprised with the feedback you've gotten from this animation. It looks like you spent a LONG time on each frame. We need more professional level animations like this on Newgrounds. You have demonstrated your dedication to your artwork, and this should serve as a message for all of the artists out there that try to get their work done as soon as possible with minimal effort. Exceptional job.
Creative idea and it was pretty well done, but... you're weird.
old news mate ;)
Good, but you need a better idea
Both your drawing and your understanding of animation are pretty good, but you need to apply these skills to a better idea. Yes, we all love a good dbz fight, but creativity always prevails on Newgrounds. Despite my criticism, you did a good job.
The way that you portray life in this animation is absolutely beautiful. We grow stronger as we face difficult times, and turn them into positive experiences. It's impressive that you could display so many deep messages in such a short flash. Well done, we need more of this on Newgrounds.
You need to become a professional
I have never seen anyone mix such humor with violence, or crappy drawings with show-level animation. This flash was more creative and well put together than most I've seen on Newgrounds. If feel that with your creativity and animation capabilities, you could have a future in having your animations created and put out to the public at a truly professional level. Hope to see your later works on TV some day!
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